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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/04/14

why bother 1 page

you ain 't got what it takes.
2 star

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by Steven_Starc06/04/14

First crack

This was my first crack at it and hope to improve over time.

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by Pulsifer4206/04/14

I like your first step

WOW !!! These critics can be R E A L L Y tough sometimes. I enjoyed your story and admire your conviction and courage to submit your first posting. I am reaching to achieve a similar step with my first effort, but it will be a while longer. Keep going.
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