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Well done! Very well done, indeed!!
Five stars across the board for each chapter.
Thank you for sharing your story.
EXCELLENT!
Very fitting conclusion to a story that only had a very few spots that became tight but overall still a 5 star every time for me. BRAVO!!
I could fill this space with lots of adjectives about your stories and writing, but I will simply say 'well done'
Very well done
Your story has developed nicely to a logical conclusion. Yes, we knew that's how it would finish because you have already said that you like a happy ending. I really enjoyed the ride, thanks.
Very nice.
Looking forward to your next submission.
Wonderful!!
I loved it!
You are a gifted writer.
More pleaseeee
#Shiny
Bet you make the connection this time (grin).
Simply and beautifully done. Kudos.
love, love loved it!
Keep writing, I look for new stuff from you regularly and can't wait for the next story!
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Excellent read
Better than 80% of the stories I have on my kindle.
loving it
Is it too much to ask for an epilogue? I want to see them having their own child or shld I say children? Pleeaasse.
It looks like someone has been 5 bombing this piece of shit.
Lots of Five Bombings!
This was a wonderful story. If someone didn't like it, why did he/she keep reading it, eh? I very much enjoyed the entire series and waited eagerly for each installment.
Thank you so very, very much. I do look forward to your next series.
Talk about melodramatic.
*sigh*
Please keep writing! I love reading your works.
Yay
So good! I felt the sex, it was so loving and passionate! It made
Me want more and more each chapter. Thank you for a great romantic
Story!
You are a very good writer
I loved reading your story. Your characters were real and true and leaped out of the pages..er..well screen and reached me in ways I can't explain. Keep writing! And I simply LOVE that you would not upload a story till it is done. Your are the perfect author.
Thank you all for your kind comments! This was such a personal story and it was scary to share it, so it's heartwarming that it was (mostly) so well-received. :)
Thank you
A good, solid romance that I really enjoyed. Glad I discovered it after all the chapters had been posted so I had instant gratification! Thank you for sharing.
Amazing!
One word: AMAZING!
Wow wow wow!
This was such a beautiful story with admirable and complex characters. I could put this down... I'm dragging at work on a Monday, bu it was well worth it.
I hope you continue writing! You're very talented.
delightful romp , well worthy of 5 stars.
i loved it , really enjoyed reading the story.
i can understand the Authors preface to chapter one.
in many ways it's not as emotional or powerful as her other work.
i don't want that to sound like a criticism, sometimes its refreshing to read something thats not so emotionaly draining or all consuming for the reader.
i had a great time reading this tale ...
without feeling like someone had reached down my throat and ripped my heart out.
without the foggy haze of tears in my eyes throughout every paragraph.
nealry 150 minutes to read, and i enjoyed it immensely.
xxxhugsxxx
TwistedOliver.
Fabulous story!!
Loved every chapter! Would love to see even more of these two and their new life together!
Excellent!
This is a very well written story. I am a real stickler for language mechanics, and I find that the vast majority of Lit authors pay disturbingly little attention to the details of spelling, grammar, and punctuation. You seem to be the exception. If there is a single error anywhere in this story, I didn't spot it. You also did an excellent job with the dialogue, having each character speak consistently in the correct vernacular. Congratulations!
Bravo!
I was rooting for Cassie all along. A sweet triumph for you as well.
Interspecies...
mating rituals are so very fascinating...(Mars/Venus)
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