My Beloved

It falls flat in that you gave given us no valid reason for him to be doing this and plenty of reason for him not to do this. 'Beloved' is used as an honorific, like mistress or goddess. It is not an endearment indicating a bond. He states he is not in love. He states emphatically that he doesn't want to be doing this. The only reason he is participating is her use of 'The Voice?' It is not sufficient balance for the negatives, thus he doesn't come across as submissive, but crazily weak minded.

I image the aficionados of this kink probably don't need reasons, just the action. For the casual reader, it is interfering. You create a very readable story. No doubt your writing skills will become even stronger over time.

Sissy boi needs something.

Sissy boi needs to be in chastity. With his little clit trying to get hard, his balls blue from weeks of being locked up. Also is sissy shaved from his neck down? How does sissy feel wearing panty's? Has sissy boi been practicing sucking cock at the ABS in the booth glory hole? With her watching and instruction him? Has she started to fuck him with a 7 inch strap on to prepare his pussy for real cock? I am sure she knows a couple of hung she males who could also help train sissy boi and breed his tight pussy. Then maybe she knows like five other sissy boi's who can use her sissy slut on cam as he sucks them all and swallows. And get bred by them as they fuck his pussy. As his caged cock drips and leaks his goo on a plate that he will clean off after.