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Carol's Very First Spanking

byMachu_Gamesmas©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/05/14

Thank you

This must be the best spanking story that I have read. Please share more stories.

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by bearslady06/05/14

Felt like you missed a chance to explore their different feelings, but overall a good story

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by Machu_Gamesmas06/07/14

Thank you

I do appreciate the critique, thank you. This is one of the first stories I wrote and didn't get into the character structure very well. Please check out some of the others I have posted.

Machu

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