This must be the best spanking story that I have read. Please share more stories.
Felt like you missed a chance to explore their different feelings, but overall a good story
I do appreciate the critique, thank you. This is one of the first stories I wrote and didn't get into the character structure very well. Please check out some of the others I have posted. Machu
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This must be the best spanking story that I have read. Please share more stories.
Felt like you missed a chance to explore their different feelings, but overall a good story
Thank you
I do appreciate the critique, thank you. This is one of the first stories I wrote and didn't get into the character structure very well. Please check out some of the others I have posted.
Machu
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