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Quickly becoming one of my favorite authors.
Ditto that!
I agree, you have a knack for intimacy that feels true and personal. Great story!
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This is such a well written story. I love the inner conflict she has, and wonder if the brother is the same. I do look forward to what you've promised to cum and will eagerly await its arrival. Thanks for the eroticism that you bring to your stories.
WOW
I ate half a bag of Cheetos, drank 3 beers and I don't remember stopping reading. Good stuff here, awesome writing.
RS
Very Good
You really seem to have the ability to make the story sound very real. Also to keep the readers interest. I am really enjoying your story and it almost seems as if this is from 1st person would love to be able to correspond with you and discuss something like this a little further. You are really turning me on for sure.
Am absolutely enthusiastical!
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