I've now read this chapter straight through, twice. As she questions how she could be tortured, without being tortured, I question how you've managed to invoke such feelings and emotions so perfectly in such a short story. I suppose I shouldn't question it, but just enjoy. Wonderful writing. Thank you.
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I've now read this chapter straight through, twice. As she questions how she could be tortured, without being tortured, I question how you've managed to invoke such feelings and emotions so perfectly in such a short story. I suppose I shouldn't question it, but just enjoy. Wonderful writing. Thank you.
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