Slutty Busty Sister

very good

i like it alot its very good just a little short

Thanks for the feedback

Thanks for the feedback. Hope yall like it, its my first story. Feedback welcomed.

good stort

Very nicely written. Easy to follow.

good start

This is a good start to what can be a nice series. Please continue on with the activities of this trio.

not good not bad

it could have been slower with better plot development and with better detail, more background and character development.

Meh

Not bad for a first go

Have to agree with the Anonymous above - - it's not bad but could have done with a little more pacing before just charging into the sex.

There's lessons to be learned but for your first story it's not bad - - don't be discouraged and keep going!

Too Quick.

Maybe this was just suppose to be a quick stroke story? If that was the case, then in my opinion, it would have been a lot better with more character development and build up. Just as some others expressed, but other than that it had a good premise.

Nice story!

You have a good thing going and I agree with some of the comments. A little more character built would had been nice. I still give it a five base on your username alone! Anyways, hope to see another chapter or a series perhaps..

Could have been more detailed. Needs more build up and needs to be plausible in some way. Good for a quick stroke, though!

Nice

I guess what happens when the parents get home...

exactly what i needed

its exactly what i needed to finger myself off before work thanks

good story

if a bit unrealistic,

ot bad but could use more work

i love this story its almost my life

My cock won't go down !