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by Anonymous

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by Magnetron06/06/14

I liked it. Works well because it doesn't rhyme when you expect it to.

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by Ashesh906/06/14

A poem from the

Flower's POV ?! Nice .

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by Trixareforkids06/06/14

Nice

I like the POV. It seems both sweet and mildly erotic. I just wish the word crumble were fall. It would have fit better IMO. Still very nice.

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