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Time for the Free Clinic
And it seems silly to write a story and leave out one of the important parts. Like how they were talked into the mechanical sex you tried to describe. And this seems more like Group Sex than LW since they were not married. Bland at best. Boring at worst.
Memories and a S.T.D.
Oh, and a missing flat screen.
Not really a story
The story would have been in the seduction--the part you intentionally skipped!
"Hi, I'm Sara and this is Willie. Let's fuck" is more than a little dull. The mechanical sex among the four cardboard cutout characters which followed was pretty much the same as thousands of other stories on this site. The seduction itself could have been unique. The characters could have been unique. The setting could have been unique. All round a missed opportunity.
Give some thought to the comments you have received for your next story. The more you write, the better you get.
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