Mom's Big Bed Ch. 01

Thanks**

For the read.

Fun story

Quite a few guys have been influenced by hippy moms. The braless mom with hairy pussy made a lasting impression.

Good story line ..

Love the story line, it makes sense and gives you a good foundation for future chapters. However, you need to get an editor; trust me it will help.

Not bad, but it could have been better.

As previous comments stated: You'd benefit from better editing. Also, considering your audience here, and what we're probably doing while reading erotica, your story was awfully short. I'd suggest something at least twice as long as this one. And finally, please don't follow in the footsteps of so many other authors who submit a "Chapter One" story, and never get around to subsequent chapters.

I don't mind a short story but....

At least end it with the incest happening at least once instead u end at him jerking off. Big deal!

At least stoner mom realized he had a woody

You managed to talk me into eating a few pieces of cold pizza, so things ended well. So far the story is a BOLO, but I believe there is more to it somewhere.
RS

To everyone saying...

Some are saying that it didn't include any sexual interaction with the mom and was too short. But, I don't think they realized that this has more than one chapter! It's not over yet! The story will go on! READ THE NEXT ONES!

Other than that, keep up the good work, good story so far!

OK, But needs chapter two!

Where's chapter 2!? I can't seem to find it..

"THAT WAS CLOSE!" I thought.

Yeah... Something erotic almost happened.

Boners AND hardons? Bahahahahaahah

Ridiculous.

annony hasb't had a hard on for years! His wife left him becasue he couldn't get it up and when he did

he was 23 inches long and lasted 10 seconds. I gave this a 5!!