Isolated Love

Great story!!

Just don't take too long to add another chapter

next chapter please

Im liking this already. Benji can kick rocks. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Very interesting start

I like this so far...

Very good beginning. Please continue and not abandon as I've seen others do. You seem to have a pretty good knack for building and maintaining.

Amazing

I love it baby! Continue continue!

You did really good for your first time. Love the buildup you have going with the characters.

Ina is a good friend and there is nothing she can do until Arabeth admit to herself that Benji is only using her.

Benji is an arrogant asshole. He only came in the store just to screw with clueless Arabeth. Too bad she doesn't realize Benji isn't the only male in the world she can be with. I wonder what happened in her past for her to be so delusional about Benji.

I can't wait to find out how Grayson and Arabeth's friendship will develop. I hope Benji doesn't make a nuisance of himself once she and Grayson become friends.

OOOOOHHHH BAAAABYYY!!! 5*

Amazing build up hun!! please keep it coming! Benny is bad news but Grayson seems like a good man. This was a great first chapter but plz make the next ones longer. ^^

Basically what my wife just said.

Great build up, but needs longer chapters. Looking forward to the next one. :)

5 Stars.

Hey guys!!

I'm so glad some of you are digging the story so far!!! I've already submitted Chapter Two and I don't think it's going to be that long, probably a little longer than this one but I'm gonna make sure Chapter Three is waaaaaaay longer, so be on the lookout! :D

*****

Obvious raw talent. Looking forward to your further efforts.

Five.

Team Grayson!!

Arabeth is really stupid, that man is not yours!! Grayson is free I say say go for it Arabeth.

YAAAAY!!!

OH MY FRIGGRN GHAD I LOOOOOOOOVE THIS YOU ARE AMAZING THIS IS PERFRCT KEEP DOING WHAT YOU'RE DOING XXXDDDD

Great start!

You have apparently mastered the art of "capture their attention right away and leave them looking forward to what happens next." I look forward to the next chapter.

Wow

Love it already!!

A Most Excellent Beginning

Now that you have our undivided attention, please do continue.

Nice

Now I want to know more about Grayson...I love that name. On to the next chapter!

Good Start

Thank you for making Arabeth realistic in the looks department, not every woman is gorgeous beyond belief and neither is any man. Not that there is anything wrong with georgeous people, just not everyone is. I look forward to more.

Great Names for the 2 main characters…Grayson and Arabeth

This is a love story in the epic fashion…sounds like this will be interesting with all the background drama of the 2 main characters love lives or lack there of and the friends they have. I can not wait to read more.