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Someone needs to talk with her dad.
Paige could not be that blind to the attraction between her dad and Randi. Maybe Paige needs to let him know its okay on her part as well -- that she wouldn't feel like he was betraying her mother -- and would not have a problem if something develops between him and Randi. (I hope that made sense.)
Great
Thought you weren't going to write anymore chapters, great chapter can't believe people rush you them having sex, me personally like the slow build up , but it's a great story line so keep up the good work , looking forward to more chapters
It did feel rushed
You should have trusted your instinct, and let the tension between Randi and Mr. D develop more slowly.
Thanks for being genuine
I want you to be you. Great series. I had a minor episode when I checked today and saw five new chapters. You da-you da best.
From FYHB:
Never feel forced to write something you and your muse did not want. This is YOURS not ours and we should not pressure the writer, just follow along and enjoy the pleasure of reading and letting our imagination run wild.
Again thanks.
Great read!
So far, after 7 chapters, I have not noticed any spelling or punctuation errors. Not that I am looking but it's unusual and that leaves me free to enjoy the story. Wish I were 38 again!
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