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Deviant Diva ( A Divine Medley )

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by twelveoone06/07/14

5ed

I get this mental image of John Waters singing

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by Ashesh906/07/14

No i don't mind :

Bein' checked out from Behind !!!???
-----immortally Erotic Sentiments of a Celebrity wannabe Diva ??,!!

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by pelegrino06/08/14

You really went to town with this one!
There are, as Ash says, some immortal erotic expressions.
Although I take it (as a whole) as a free fantasy, it starts solidly develops skilfully and concludes successfully, so as a musical form is more rich than a medley, while retaining its freedom to add more if you want, as you would do in a medley.
Well done.
5ed.

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by todski2806/09/14

very cool

read. Enjoyed this. Almost feels like a stripper is running this as inferior monologue while she struts her stuff.

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