A Shocking Discovery

Liked it!

I hope you plan to add to this story.

yes do add

Don't Worry

Thank you very much for your feedback!

I plan on writing several stories that feature Jason and Rachel, some about their lives before they became a couple, and will definitely continue where this story left off.

Not Bad

I found it to be interesting. I haven't really read many Brother/ Sister stories more of a Mother/Son, guy tbh. But something was appealing about this. I wish you had made one of them more apprehensive about crossing into the line of taboo. That would of added to the intensity of when they finally threw themselves at each other. I'm looking forward to more.

more

Yes, more please!!

Decent

It went kind of fast, but a one page fuck normally does. Keep it up with twists and turns!
RS

Good start

I really wish there was more build up and apprehension. You had a good base for such emotion but jumped to a quick sex scene without much notice. It was a little jarring for her to go from extremely disturbed to proposing romance to her brother. Maybe you could rewrite it from her point of view giving more detail on the process of young taboo love to a failed romance and back to her feelings for her brother.

Thank You

I appreciate everyone's feedback. In the next installment of this story I will definitely address the fast nature of their relationship. I hope that you will all stick with me as I continue to grow as an author.

A Good Start

Now it calls for more chapters. Thanks