and yet, how awful to be in a situation with a daily drunk, surely mom must be a mess to have to live with. Added to that the frequent issues with guilt and shame, certainly real. Very good story! I like your style. Only thing, I don't think you have to remind us so many times it's Gary who's doing this, but that's minor. I think three paragraphs in a row start with "Gary ..."
Looking forward to Chapter 5!
I've been eagerly reading each Chapter as you release them and simply love how you are bring this situation closer and closer, teasing us as your characters are teasing each other. While we probably know where this is going, your 'slow fuck' methods are making this so much better. Now I need to wait and I will do so. Thanks for this and for continuing to post here.
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and yet, how awful to be in a situation with a daily drunk, surely mom must be a mess to have to live with. Added to that the frequent issues with guilt and shame, certainly real. Very good story! I like your style. Only thing, I don't think you have to remind us so many times it's Gary who's doing this, but that's minor. I think three paragraphs in a row start with "Gary ..."
Looking forward to Chapter 5!
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I've been eagerly reading each Chapter as you release them and simply love how you are bring this situation closer and closer, teasing us as your characters are teasing each other. While we probably know where this is going, your 'slow fuck' methods are making this so much better. Now I need to wait and I will do so. Thanks for this and for continuing to post here.
Great crescendo, it makes it enjoable and real.
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