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Emmeline's Desires Pt. 03

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by Anonymous

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by small_town_girl06/10/14

wow. hot and messy... just the way i like it!

love this story already. thank you!

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by TornadoTys06/10/14

Girl is confused !

Good development from the situation of the night before.
I thought subs were not allowed to have more than 1 master ! ?

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by mel_pomene06/10/14

Excellent!

Another five stars, hugs, and a huge 'Thank you!'.

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by Shysub41206/10/14

Just keeps getting better

I like the way you portray here confusion over Benji and the need she has to be Dominated, it's hard to walk away from a relationship and a D/s relationship maybe harder as its not easy to put the trust needed in a new Dom quickly. I hope though she kicks him into touch as i feel she can do so much better.
Another 5 stars from this corner

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by Anonymous06/11/14

More please?

This is phenomenally well written and executed and if you could write more that would be superb.

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by KinkyMable06/12/14

Hi

Thanks for all the compliments. I'm working on more now.

Sorry for any typos. I published the first three parts all at once without realizing my computer hadn't saved my edits.

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