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Not believable in the least
She took literally no convincing to suck the first kids dick? Right. Totally believable. And suddenly she calls him master? At least there were few typos.
haha
Garbage!! Stopped reading after first paragraph
Could be a contender for the worst story on the Lit!
Could be a contender for the worst story on the Lit!
And that is saying a lot!
Please do try another hobby as this writing lark does not suit you..
LOOK FOR A DUMPSTER @@@@@@@@@@@@@@
That's were this trash goes, not on this site we have plenty as it is. NO OFFENCE TO THE GOOD GUYS...........................
hello
You are all wrong. The story is excellent indeed.. Read the story of my girlfriend and step-mother.
Oooh sexy mama
I do love your style!
I hope you allow many of Caleb's to visit Holly very often!
She should never need to go out with anybody older than his friends ever again!
Keep up the good work MAMA.
I know this is only supposed to be fantasy, therefore unrealistic,
but come on! Complete trash, neither funny nor sexy, and definitely not a turn on; I suggest you do what a previous poster said and, for the sake of all our sanity, find a dumpster and another hobby.
This is the last story
of yours that I will read.
Before commenting I thought I'd read your profile. Now I understand your story - because you're insane. Your crudity and arrogance are truly mind-boggling.
As for the story itself, it is bad, bad, bad. The whole premise is completely implausible and the way it is written shows total disrespect for your reader(s), not to mention Holly, the main character in this mess.
Do you not think that people will notice when a man drops his pants so that they "gathered round his feet" and then (after having already approached her and "reached her") he is "striding across to Holly.". Of course he didn't trip over them! That's just one continuity mistake.
This story seems to be about a young man's seduction (if that's what you can call it.) of his friend's Mom. His chat-up technique? To simply walk in on her and drop his pants and say "Just get me off babe. I need this so bad. I'll help you out too." Yeah that would work! Apparently it dd here because "She immediately dropped to her knees, taking his cock in her mouth." And so it goes on.
The friend's reaction when his mom says she couldn't help doing it? "How hard is it not to suck the dicks of my friends mother?" His friend's mother has a dick? That's unusual. And not only that but she apparently has more than one! I think a comma might have helped! But then, according to your profile - "I don't care if you don't think the story was good & I could care even less if I spelled a word or two wrong."
Well, I don't care if I don't read any more of your garbage. I didn't even read to the end of this one. Enough crap was enough.
There are two complimentary comments.
And both contain errors.
One refers readers to his own story, without saying what it's called or where it can be found.
And the other has the word 'friends' missing - well, I assume it's friends.
If the ones who like this kind of drivel are that dumb, what does it say about the author?
lol
incest stories like this make me wish mommy had swallowed her little boy before fertilization
Son
We had a party and drank after a bit my mom was drunk and my friends started feeling her up. They took her cothes off and feeling her up.After a while they were naked and she was sucking and fucking all of them. They all still come around when want sex and she still make them happy. She has become a whore to all my friends.
Crude but very possible
All women are the same, SLUTS.
Girlfriend, coed, teacher, coworker, colleague, nurse, cousin, niece, aunt, sister in law, mother in law, grandma, sister, and mother.
I had them all sucking and fucking.
You just help them to watch your bulge, touch your cock and they will get wet and want it inside.
Mouth, pussy or very lubed anus, they like it a lot.
That's the main reason for them to exist.
Just dare to do it and you will get it.
Enjoy them and let them enjoy you.
I cant say...
I'm sorry, I gave up reading after just a couple of hundred words, due partly to your rushed approach of the story, and simply because of your poor eye to continuity.
*He slowly approached her across the room. She stood there silently, until he reached her.
Then a couple of lines later you wrote; *Terry pushed the door shut before striding over to Holly.
Had I read on, I feared you would have told us he'd walked over to her again?
Son of mom
Holly is like my whore mother, she is to my sex slave!!
Damned
I was stroking my little dick wishing I was her from the first. The way the first guy came in and made her suck his cock then the son. I want to be a gangs bitch
Happy Son
All moms should teach son and their friends about sex. She should suck and fuck all of them all the time. Let sons show how great mom's body and what she can do.
Great Story!
Mom's and son's belong together. My mom is 39 and I am 21. Mom became my lover 3 years ago.
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