Neighborhood Dad Ch. 08

great storie

was afraid you would stop @ 7 glad you didn't , hope you have many more chapters:)

Very interesting!

Had lost this story for months. Now you have my attention again. Please keep going.

I am really liking this story, but I hope it does not devolve into chapters on basketball games, which is interesting, but hardly food for the soul. Hmmmm, longer chapters would be lovely too.

Lots left

No, I won't turn this into a sports book. Like J.K. Rowling feeling the need to include a quidditch match in her books, it seemed necessary to show the coach in his own element.
Plus, I've had a couple of women tell me they knew they were falling in love while watching me playing guitar. Seeing someone have success in their field is an aphrodisiac to many -- hell, I've seen the pretty girl in the bar flirting with the ugly guy with the pool stick.
Seeing the coach pull out a win must seem like magic to those in the stands.

Short and Sweet

Someone commented about wanting longer chapters. Nope, not gonna happen.
I like short chapters -- and it keeps me writing.
Also, I work as a writer; there are only so many hours in a day/week that I can spend in front of a monitor before my eyes wear out (and my butt too).

I and I suspect most other readers, don't read stories on this site to get "their sports fix". I am not interested in the bouncy ball stuff, get back to Randi. Notice how that chapter had the highest score?

Glad this is back

Good to see you continuing this story, personally I don't care if the chapters are one or ten pages long as long as you put them up in a decent pace. By that I mean more then one in two months I just like to see the stories come to a finish

Keep it up

Keep at it LH. This is a fantastic story. If you guys are so sex crazed, put on a hardcore porn or go onto adult friend finder where you can get it faster than a pizza. LH remember, great talent has often been criticized by mediocrity and small mindedness.

Hey coach.

Your heads in the game, don't lose it after the game. Unless your alone. A very natural feel to this story, I forget we are in high school.

Basketball?

Good bye!