by StrangeView
Fun and exciting and definitely hot! Intriguing too, I'd be interested in reading the sequel. However, I felt it could have used a bit more length. I could feel the pace increase over time, it would have been nice to keep it consistent. But overall, great!
Without any initial premise to build any kind of characterisation of the main protagonist, this is just uncomfortably rapey to be honest...
Some of the descriptive prose shows promise in the use of language but the story misses the mark so badly it isn't worth pursuing any further as a reader...
as a woman this is one sexy story. so many thing the fill a nicce girls fantasies.....