All Comments on 'A Change in Station Ch. 01'

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimalmost 10 years ago
Or she could sue them all to hell and back

That's another option.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I'm with masterfuljim on this one. Police would be all over this and the courts would definitely be in her favour if she sued. That's ignoring the media attention this would get as your main character is obviously from a privileged family. This is unrealistic.

FA_JFFA_JFalmost 10 years ago

I love an accurate author note. Thank you.

AtavistAtavistalmost 10 years ago
Love it

Hope you write more, looks really hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Except that posting the video, you have an up address and without editing, it was evident she was being forced.

Can we say lawsuit? Can we say prison? Can we say rape? Sure we can. Now, maybe if you weren't such a lame assed writer, you wouldn't use the standard blackmail bullshit to justify your story.

GigglingGoblinGigglingGoblinalmost 10 years ago
Implausible, But Eh

Hee! Yeah, if this story was gonna be realistic, they would be in so much shit right now. This is the sort of story where you kinda wish there was an alternate one handling everything realistically, where Molly calls the police and these assholes pay.

BUUUUT, well, yeah, it's written porn. I'm not one to nitpick, and I can't deny envying Molly juuuust a little. In the way one would expect, obviously—Jesus, this story's vicious. :P

JamesRichJamesRichalmost 10 years ago
Impudent little story.

Impudent but funny. I can see the fun in all the boys and girls humiliating Molly. She loved the cock and she loved the pussy. The rich kid sized up the situation perfectly and, for only being 18, I'm impressed with his insight into Molly.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Why exactly is she listening to and doing everything this little cunt says?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Holy shit this was so hot

Claudia69Claudia69over 3 years ago
Kinky Story!!!

I feel the Maid will one day get the upper hand...

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