Thank you and welcome, alwayshasapen, this was a great introduction to your talent as a writer - far too good for that cheesy, 'The End - Or Is It?' line at the end of the first chapter. If you have more to write, write it - I'm sure there are many others like myself who would love to read more. Five stars.
I don't usually continue to read a story where the sub is the male, (my bad but it just doesn't work for me!) having said that wow!! I was gripped and read the whole chapter! As my user name suggests I'm submissive but if anyone dog eared one of my books i think I'd easily switch!! A great story with an excellent mix of humour and heat.
Personally as a lover of old cheesy good guy/bad guy movies, the cheesy "the end or is it?" made me chuckle, if this was your intention (the superman/cat woman) references makes me believe so, then it worked, if not well yes Mel was right!
5 stars and thank you for broadening my horizons.
If you are asking us if it should be the end then the answer is a resounding NO! Too many people forget the fun part of sex. And a domme who itsn't batshit psycho? Yes, may I have another? *holds empty bowl uppward*
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Most enjoyable!
Thank you and welcome, alwayshasapen, this was a great introduction to your talent as a writer - far too good for that cheesy, 'The End - Or Is It?' line at the end of the first chapter. If you have more to write, write it - I'm sure there are many others like myself who would love to read more. Five stars.
Wow, excellent!!!
I don't usually continue to read a story where the sub is the male, (my bad but it just doesn't work for me!) having said that wow!! I was gripped and read the whole chapter! As my user name suggests I'm submissive but if anyone dog eared one of my books i think I'd easily switch!! A great story with an excellent mix of humour and heat.
Personally as a lover of old cheesy good guy/bad guy movies, the cheesy "the end or is it?" made me chuckle, if this was your intention (the superman/cat woman) references makes me believe so, then it worked, if not well yes Mel was right!
5 stars and thank you for broadening my horizons.
If you are asking us if it should be the end then the answer is a resounding NO! Too many people forget the fun part of sex. And a domme who itsn't batshit psycho? Yes, may I have another? *holds empty bowl uppward*
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