by WFEATHER
oh yes indeed i am! and thoroughly enjoyed that, you had a hard job depicting it from his view of her but i think you suceeded!
DO YOU EVEN KONW WHAT HENTAI REALLY IS DUMB ASS???????
HENTAI: Cartoon porn with fantasy elements i.e. tenticals, sex with demons, superheros with reviling clothes, etc
GET THE GODDAMN POINT???????? YOU DUMB SHIT???????/
AND THIS MAKES IT LOOK LIKE YOU DON'T KNOW JACK SHIT ABOUT HENTAI
Contrary to what the other comment said I think you got a good story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Don't let ungrateful people get you down. This story may not have been a cartoon but it's still considerable hentai material.