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Surprise Video Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/08/14

Potential, but....

no depth to the story. Just, a psychologist (supposedly good mate) talks the wife in to f*cking him and others on tape to cuckold the man! I'm a cuckold and think this is a cheat story rather than cuckold, which is a shame as the story could have been so much more than it is!

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by looking4it06/08/14

LMFAO

You even put fetish in the "warning" and still post it here. Cuck morons, wtf.

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by Anonymous06/08/14

Idiocy Personified

Wow! That was dumb First commenter had it right.Glorified.cheating.

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by Anonymous06/08/14

Just horrible

Forget the category or the warning or the subject matter. This was badly written. Not enough words to make a story, let alone a decent or interesting story. Just awful.

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by impo_5806/08/14

This is cheating...

After have talked with the friend, she should have talked with her husband...an only then she could have cuckolded...Like this is wife cheating and friend cheating...And cheating shouldn't ever been forgiven...I told here once: with friends like this, who needs enemies?

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by Anonymous06/08/14

Take the tape, go direct to a divorce lawyer

And while you're at it, sue the psychologist for malpractice.

Finally, make sure to get the video with the shrink's son and get it to the college administration.

Oh, almost forgot, if the shrink is married, get copies to his wife. The wife will probably also want to know that her husband is arranging for his own son (and hers) to participate in the debauchery. Maybe there was some gay incest involved as well.

Our hero should be able to fuck up everybody and keep them fucked for the rest of their lives.

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by Anonymous06/08/14

re: THIS IS A CUCKOLD FETISH STORY. DO NOT READ FURTHER IF CUCKOLD STORIES OFFEND YOU.

Exactly what good is a warning that is given AFTER opening the story? Answer: nothing. It's like posting a "Do Not Enter" sign that can only be read after entering the room.

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by OOAA06/08/14

EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

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by Anonymous06/09/14

i believe there will be more chapters

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by Anonymous06/09/14

Next

Looking forward to be next chapter

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Wow

This is why you don't allow anonymous coward comments....

Your story was awesome - loved the angle, speed, idea... but the thing about the son at the end, just so jarring and out of place. If you throw someone else into the mix, do it after the main characters have developed.

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by Anonymous06/09/14

HO HUM!!!

YES SIR. You have joined the stupid peoples club. Congrats. Predictable.

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by Anonymous06/09/14

undecided

As a stroke story, it is good first chapter. Great setup for future stories.

As a "loving wife" story, it is very disheartening. It is obvious they there are huge problems in their relationship, even prior to her cheating.

So my horny side likes it, but my rational side is saddened by it. I say keep going, but the next chapter will decide what kind of story it is. Will the husband snap out of his lustful stupor and get angry. Or will he accept his role as cuckold.

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by DWornock06/10/14

At 37 she was still smoking hot

Totally false. It is possible at 27 but after that they are just too old. Therefore 1*.

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by Anonymous06/10/14

You said this was fetish.

Than put your fucked up little fantasy in fetish.

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by devilspy06/14/14

A true friend.

The stud Mark is a good friend. He helped your hot wife that was ready to leave your ass over watching and reading porn. Poor excuse if you ask me, but some women are like that. As a hung stud, I could see right away she was over reacting. Lucky for you Mark stepped in before she called you and told you she would be gone by the time you returned. Now for chapter two I suggest you finish telling about the first video. And another reader is right, finish one chapter, develop your characters before introducing others. You can for shadow later. Don't forget cuckold is already in total shock, but springing more on him than he can handle would sent him to see a lawyer. Also, what kind of porn he watched. Where some of chastity cuckolds? Cuckold's who cleaned creampies, sucked cock, swallowed loads? I wait for the next chapter. Ignore the trolls. You warned everyone right at the start what this was about.

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by becontree2001uk06/22/14

Nice story. I hope you write more like this

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by Anonymous07/13/14

Good start

Great start, but he story kinda fizzled. Seems more like revenge sex for watching porn than real cuckolding. Fix that and ad more about the video and and more chapters you've got at least a 3-1/2 spurt weiner! I mean winner!!!

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by Dick8811/15/14

37 can still be hot

@DWornock and anyone else with the same point of view

Let me tell you about my coworker Jenny, she works in human resources, doesn't wear much makeup, has at least 2 kids that I know of, and is a blonde bombshell, and how do I know she is in her late 30's cause I work along side her 18 year-old son, she's damn near 40 and still turning heads.

There's only one girl in the company that beats her on looks, she shows up once or twice a year (She's happens to be my Christmas treat btw, especially last year when she accidentally backed-up her Grade A ass onto my dick, after she had dropped her pen in line at the holiday brunch, she knew I was there she just didn't know she'd end up pressing kardashian-like ass onto me; sadly she didn't do it on purpose) anyway she works at corporate, disappointingly I don't know he name cause they gotta keep her locked up after all that chick is walking instant Viagra, trust me on this.

Why? Cause I swear I was gonna get canned with a sexual harassment complaint since she bumped into my hard as steel dick at that last holiday brunch, but Jenny, the kind person that she is, saved my blue-balled ass by putting an amazing word in on my behalf. After all I'm not like the drooling idiots at work, despite them being married men, they seem incapable of keep it in their pants, and I've been nothing but respectful both towards her and every woman in the company regardless of looks (regrettably I can't say that about any other guy that works there, except Jenny's son) but even I have my limits, my dick can't stay limp forever.

Oh and one last thing instant boner chick is in her ealry 30's and I highly doubt that her beauty will fade in the next five years. I can't wait for Christmas. :D

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by Anonymous01/24/15

What?

I thought this was a btb story instead it is cuckolding. Do I think the husband should divorce her right away? Yes, I think he should divorce her. Let her live out her fantasies. Forget the bitch.

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by Anonymous03/01/15

how long

so how long has she been cheating on her husband. and then she finds a excuse to cheat. what if his fantasy was fucking other married women. Dump the bitch now. life will only get worse there is no trust there

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