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A Good Girl Is an Easy Sacrifice

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous06/11/14

*****

Well written.

Five.

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by Anonymous06/11/14

more?

I hope there is more to this I would like to see where their relationship goes. And if she gets better.

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by ariesgirl06/11/14

What happened in Johnny's past that has him comparing himself to his dad?

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by HuckPilgrim06/11/14

Thank you!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm very grateful. I do have some plans to continue this particular plot line in the Bronx.

These characters, though, are from an ongoing series I have about the sex lives of people in a small town called Carnal. This is the first time Johnny has appeared in a story, but his dad and brother appear in some of the others stories (dubious consent for dad and gay men for little brother).

ariesgirl, that's such an interesting comment. Johnny has left home because he was addicted to heroin. I don't think anything terrible happened between him and his dad, but Johnny is critical of his father's relationships to women, which always seem pretty selfish even to me. I really like the idea of a male in the role of a codependent type relationship person. I think it's going to be a fun story line to work with.

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