A nice build up and well written. My only [slight] criticism is that it seemed to end very quickly with the entire climax - pun intended - in one paragraph. Still, well worth reading!
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Anonymous06/10/14
Loser
Bitch.
I guess some pathetic types get off on being humiliated like that.
by
Anonymous06/10/14
Nice!
Sandy is hot.
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Anonymous06/10/14
great story
great story. a fast sexy read. He should have fucked her though while she was taking her of his friend.
This was a good, quick little story. There were a few typos that you might want to fix, but they aren't too distracting.
Both the main character and Jim behave a little strangely. I guess the point is that the main character is discovering he actually likes being cuckolded (though he never says much) but why does Jim not seem to care that he is humiliating his friend? Maybe it doesn't matter for a shorter story like this.
Otherwise I enjoyed the story - the stripping was well written in particular.
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Anonymous10/07/14
NICE STORY
Nice story, could have been better if Jim would have cum in her mouth, then let her sit on his lap and fuck her while you jerked off again.
I know I would have hammered her in front of you.
Once you let her suck my cock, I'd own her.
try adding chapter two.
English
dump her
what a biiiiiiitch
Masochism is Cool!
Girlfriend should milk both attentive males, prior to being humiliated?
hot story
A nice build up and well written. My only [slight] criticism is that it seemed to end very quickly with the entire climax - pun intended - in one paragraph. Still, well worth reading!
Loser
Bitch.
I guess some pathetic types get off on being humiliated like that.
Nice!
Sandy is hot.
great story
great story. a fast sexy read. He should have fucked her though while she was taking her of his friend.
Pretty good
This was a good, quick little story. There were a few typos that you might want to fix, but they aren't too distracting.
Both the main character and Jim behave a little strangely. I guess the point is that the main character is discovering he actually likes being cuckolded (though he never says much) but why does Jim not seem to care that he is humiliating his friend? Maybe it doesn't matter for a shorter story like this.
Otherwise I enjoyed the story - the stripping was well written in particular.
NICE STORY
Nice story, could have been better if Jim would have cum in her mouth, then let her sit on his lap and fuck her while you jerked off again.
I know I would have hammered her in front of you.
Once you let her suck my cock, I'd own her.
try adding chapter two.
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