Ah, so close and so hot. I love this series and so look forward to the next chapter. Your exposure of Elizabeth's thoughts fit so well with the action, her doubts fighting her wants. While I suspect we know that eventually her wants will overrule her doubts, you manage to leave all avenues open. Alluring and sexy, well written and developed. Thanks!
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All the way!
Society says it's wrong, but this is fiction and the two need each other with a mom who's nonexistent. Great story!
I How I love to be Teased
Ah, so close and so hot. I love this series and so look forward to the next chapter. Your exposure of Elizabeth's thoughts fit so well with the action, her doubts fighting her wants. While I suspect we know that eventually her wants will overrule her doubts, you manage to leave all avenues open. Alluring and sexy, well written and developed. Thanks!
Excellent story
I love this story. Emotionally engaging, rich in detail, as if being part of it.
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