Very well written. I generally don't like one page stories but you did a perfect job of pacing the action. This was a good beginning to an ongoing relationship. Have fun with it and thanks.
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A Perfect Short Story
Very well written. I generally don't like one page stories but you did a perfect job of pacing the action. This was a good beginning to an ongoing relationship. Have fun with it and thanks.
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