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by greenmountaineer06/09/14

This is good, cavu, except the rhyme in the last line of the first stanza felt forced to me. The language was nice and fluid elsewhere.

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by Trixareforkids06/10/14

Common folk here

I liked that line myself. I liked this and the way it flowed and where it went. Nice, 5d

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