There are a few whose soul purpose for visiting this site at all seems to be to drag down stories and rain on others' parades; thankfully, they are few in number and usually hide behind an 'Anonymous' parapet.
I enjoyed your story - it was a bit on the brief side, but still very good. Thank you for sharing what is an obvious talent with us and please keep writing - and always remember, YOU CANNOT PLEASE EVERYONE; trying to is a sure route to disappointment.
Thank you for your input. I welcome all who read this to email or comment on my stories. it just helps me get better. you cannot please everyone and I know I will get some negativity but I have only received positive comments and support. obviously those who leave bad comments don't know how hard it is to get a good story on paper. I don't pay any mind to anonymous comments because people use it as a way to hide behind who they are. if they want to comment, fine. just please leave a name. Mel, your comment is inspiring and hopefully i can dream up another story soon.
Your story ideas are good. I'm no expert but I think your writing is getting better all the time.
I enjoyed this even though it was a little short, the slave boy seemed have got off easy. But then again I think these stories could easily be seen as episodes in the life of the same domme.
Keep it going :)))
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There are a few whose soul purpose for visiting this site at all seems to be to drag down stories and rain on others' parades; thankfully, they are few in number and usually hide behind an 'Anonymous' parapet.
I enjoyed your story - it was a bit on the brief side, but still very good. Thank you for sharing what is an obvious talent with us and please keep writing - and always remember, YOU CANNOT PLEASE EVERYONE; trying to is a sure route to disappointment.
Five stars.
Mel
Thank you for your input. I welcome all who read this to email or comment on my stories. it just helps me get better. you cannot please everyone and I know I will get some negativity but I have only received positive comments and support. obviously those who leave bad comments don't know how hard it is to get a good story on paper. I don't pay any mind to anonymous comments because people use it as a way to hide behind who they are. if they want to comment, fine. just please leave a name. Mel, your comment is inspiring and hopefully i can dream up another story soon.
coming along
Your story ideas are good. I'm no expert but I think your writing is getting better all the time.
I enjoyed this even though it was a little short, the slave boy seemed have got off easy. But then again I think these stories could easily be seen as episodes in the life of the same domme.
Keep it going :)))
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