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ManhattanMasterManhattanMasterabout 17 years agoAuthor
A masterful story.

I'm the author and I didn't know there was such a thing as "public comments" when I posted it. But I've gotten private feedback from countless women who have told me the story got them extraordinarily aroused. I've only had one man (on the internet who knows?) write me and he liked the story but wished "I" (he meant the narrator of the story) had "fucked the red head too." That was a wonderful and funny response. If anyone ever reads "Student Library" again I hope they will leave a public comment.

All the best, ManhattanMaster

Mr. UnsexyMr. Unsexyabout 17 years ago
your comment cracked me up

it seemed a little far fetched at first, but with the way you ran with it i eventually decided not to care. good stuff.

jumbo_jimmybjumbo_jimmybalmost 16 years ago
awesome!

Incredibly hot! I wish that was me and not the lucky S.O.B. in the story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
ok

too long.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
kewl or hott.

it was kool!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Wow.

This is the hottest story I think I've ever read. I came so hard reading this, I now really want a man who'd do this to me.

Excellent story. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A bdsm masterpiece.

Read it and tell me what you think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Hot story!

I would definately say this lived up to the "H"! ;)

Should be a "W" for Wet, really.

~C (49rldy)

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I can't believe how wet I became reading this (lol). HOT! ; }

I went to the stories that got an E and an H both and picked this by random (well I suppose its having to do with bdsm helped too - lol). It is both erotic and extremely well written. And super sexy.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
deserved both the red h and the green e that it got. very hot and erotic.

It's a long story and I started touching myself at the beginning and didn't stop until the end and had two orgasms on the way. Great story. wow.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I am overwhelmed. I lean towards BDSM and I feel over loaded. Yes, it was a long story. You had a lot to fit in, didn't you WRITER ? You write well. The story moved along. Good use of dialogue. Just very erotic entertainment. KEEP writing ! 5 STARS.

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I live in NY. If you have read my story, Student Library, you know that I'm reasonably intelligent and enjoy the company of women. ManhattanMaster