I love how you have written this story I am sorry that you felt pressured in to putti fb sex into the story before you felt it was ready but I am glad that you did not put it in the chapters since then just work it in at your own pace it feels natural that they are not getting together all of a sudden and fucking like rabbits for every chapter. Thank you for the wonderful read.
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Anonymous06/15/14
whole series great
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Anonymous07/18/14
I agree!
I agree with 'great story'. I felt a bit teary after this chapter. I felt happy that it wasn't a one off for them, but would have another build up to their next time together. I really feel for the characters. Thanks for a great read.
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Anonymous01/29/15
Hmmm....
Theres at least one good innuendo per chapter, keep it up .!
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Great story
I love how you have written this story I am sorry that you felt pressured in to putti fb sex into the story before you felt it was ready but I am glad that you did not put it in the chapters since then just work it in at your own pace it feels natural that they are not getting together all of a sudden and fucking like rabbits for every chapter. Thank you for the wonderful read.
whole series great
I agree!
I agree with 'great story'. I felt a bit teary after this chapter. I felt happy that it wasn't a one off for them, but would have another build up to their next time together. I really feel for the characters. Thanks for a great read.
Hmmm....
Theres at least one good innuendo per chapter, keep it up .!
Really enjoying this storyline!
Very likable characters, great dialogue and plot.
The boink in 6 seemed rushed but think it's time for some more contact...
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