I'm sorry Susan but the 20 questions & insecurities was too drawn out for me. I understand in real life this could be a crisis situation but 2 pages of "double-standard secrets" and back and forth, one minute he's excited, then guilty, then scared and twenty million questions in between. The only reason I continued to read it is I thought there would be a big "payoff" in the end, which you did leave it open to the reader to image that Veronica's husband may be bi-sexual too (that's my take on it). Will I read the next chapter, probably cause I want to see Emma and Veronica get it on. So keep writing and all the best
Too much insecurity talk
I'm sorry Susan but the 20 questions & insecurities was too drawn out for me. I understand in real life this could be a crisis situation but 2 pages of "double-standard secrets" and back and forth, one minute he's excited, then guilty, then scared and twenty million questions in between. The only reason I continued to read it is I thought there would be a big "payoff" in the end, which you did leave it open to the reader to image that Veronica's husband may be bi-sexual too (that's my take on it). Will I read the next chapter, probably cause I want to see Emma and Veronica get it on. So keep writing and all the best
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