Suggest using more graphic and detailed descriptions so the reader can picture the action in his or her mind and better share the experience(s) you are trying to describe.
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Good plot.
Suggest using more graphic and detailed descriptions so the reader can picture the action in his or her mind and better share the experience(s) you are trying to describe.
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