Tim has been reaping the benefit of Gwen's more relaxed attitude in the last few chapters. Perhaps to stop the next chapter being too similar in theme as the previous couple it's time for Natalie to get involved again?
Basically though, whatever the author chooses to write, I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy it!
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Anonymous06/30/14
great job!
I've been following this story series and I think the author's done a great job of keeping up the the quality throughout. The most impressive part to me is that he's been able to make Gwen loosen up without turning her into a big slut. There are a lot of possibilities for the future, but I'm hoping she doesn't go all the way with some of them because I still like her character and some of that would just be too much of a cliché.
English
Outstanding
As usual the writing and plotting is top-drawer.
Tim has been reaping the benefit of Gwen's more relaxed attitude in the last few chapters. Perhaps to stop the next chapter being too similar in theme as the previous couple it's time for Natalie to get involved again?
Basically though, whatever the author chooses to write, I'm pretty sure I'll enjoy it!
great job!
I've been following this story series and I think the author's done a great job of keeping up the the quality throughout. The most impressive part to me is that he's been able to make Gwen loosen up without turning her into a big slut. There are a lot of possibilities for the future, but I'm hoping she doesn't go all the way with some of them because I still like her character and some of that would just be too much of a cliché.
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