I absolutely loved it, I'm still hard!! I sure hope you write about these 2 again.
Thanks
jdjd432003@yahoo.com
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Anonymous03/24/04
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was one of the best erotic/incest stories I have ever read (and I have read many of them). Thank you very much and please keep up the good work.
Jim
by
Anonymous06/04/04
Great story.
This story was so real. The only way that this could be done is if it really happened to you. Great writer. Makes me feel as if I were there. Great.
by
Anonymous06/30/04
i lost count !!....
heh heh .. its gooooooodddddd... i think i cummed 4/5 times...just lost the count ... me still hard...and i m sweating like a pig (do pigs sweat??)... i think i will do it again after 15 minutes.. ;-) ..
by
Anonymous07/04/04
Awesome
Wish there was a sequel damn this was hot
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Anonymous07/17/04
PLEASE CONTINUE
"peeping tom" was a great story and it was of this kind.. it was real fun when parents never knew it. and my god.. when her sis gives him a note saying "PEEPING TOM", oh god, what a great writer u are? keep it up man. yet, its really hard to say which is the best story? each story is Best.
reading stories on this site since last 4 years. i must admit. PEEPING TOM is the best i've ever read. I m surprised why there is no second part?
comeon guy. U MUST WRITE. please? its a request. hope u will consider it.
by
Anonymous08/13/04
Amazing
Anais Nin, who's she? You are the best eroticist on the web--maybe anywhere.
by
Anonymous09/08/04
I agree
We really need a continuation of this story. The kids are growing up and needing each other and i think it would be great if you did someting wioth them where they had more than just a couple of hours to play and experiment...give them a weekend with thier parents going to a retreat or something and leaving them home alone. That would be a great story!
You are very talented and one of the best writers of erotica. I have managed to read all of your stories and I look forward to more!
by
Anonymous09/25/04
so erotic
This has got to be one of the most erotic stories I have read in Literotica to date. Those little notes between sister and brother made me so hard, I thought I was going to bust out of my jeans, and the shower scene had me cumming in my pants. Keep up the good work and continue this story, Please!
by
Anonymous10/04/04
Great
I have read several of your brother/sister stories and loved them all. You are one of the most talented writers of erotica I have read. I especially like the build-up and the escalation of sexual tension. Keep up the good work
by
Anonymous10/14/04
awsome
Best bro/sis one i have read so far keep them cumming
I have not been into incest stories. But if they are like this I'll start now. Great Story. Thanks.
by
Anonymous11/10/04
TWO VIRGINS LOST TOGETHER
H O T ~ H O T. Brother and sister, with sister leading the charge to a wonderful story of a lost cherry. Brother was lucky. I had a twin sister - she and I became very clost at age 13 - bur REALLY CLOSE at age 15. I believe this story is real.
by
Anonymous12/03/04
Damn Hot Story!!!
Wow, that story IS the best bro/sis story I have ever read! I hope you continue this encounter, I would love to read more.
by
Anonymous01/02/05
Hot Stuff!
Brother/sister stories always get me feeling very horney, especially when they are so well done as yours. Lots of detail, descriptions, and thoughts and feelings. What more coculd these two explore together? He hasen't orally pleased her yet, might they try anal, or different positions, or places around the house...
by
Anonymous01/25/05
Really Great! -Very Well Thought Out-
Hi, Great Story! The best I have ever read in this category!
I think the key to this story is the undertones of a strict religious household (adds to the taboo factor in the mind of the reader)..
I believe that the most successful story appeals most to common mental triggers (taboo's) and this story definitely does that (especially with the religious household - as stated above)..
Also, the length was just right, in my opinion, not too short and not too long :)
. . . and the device of the notes. You built your story well, and the characters and situations are believable.
by
Anonymous04/09/05
Too hot for words!
This is definitely one of the hottest stories I have ever read about brother-sister incest. The tension brought about by the possible discovery by their parents adds a whole new dimension to the story. Even so, I'd like to read at least one chapter in which they can just freely make love without having to worry about the parents. Looking forward to more from you....
by
Anonymous06/06/05
One of the hottest!!
WOW! One of the greatest I've ever read. Many thanks.
Looking forward to more like it.
by
Anonymous07/01/05
Best story EVER.
You need to write more.
You have the bets stories here on this site.
by
Anonymous07/19/05
WOW
That was awesome keep up the great work. Very very good job.
by
Anonymous08/28/05
WRITE MORE.
WRITE MORE PLZ?
you write really well & i love all of your other stories.
by
Anonymous09/12/05
Damn You're Good!!!!!
Enjoyed your story, as always! Sure wish I had the talent you have in writing! My talent is all in the sex, I just can't write about it!
YOU RULE! Keep up the great work!
RG
by
Anonymous09/15/05
Not Your Typical...
This is not your typical suck and fuck story, it was well written and the characters were believable. I liked the way you had them gradually become aware of their desire for each other and the natural progression of their sex play. It was very well written. Look forward to more stories from you.
by
Anonymous09/23/05
nice oh so nice ...
nicely written - cock-tip dripping by the end ... but how did it end?
by
Anonymous09/23/05
super story
very good story. well written and arousing. very believable and made me hard.
by
Anonymous10/06/05
loved it - from a woman
just wanted to differentiate from the male readers. love all of your stories, agree with other comments that you write with the 'voice' of the characters you create. thanks!
by
Anonymous11/10/05
The best Symphonies are unfinished
The best story I have ever read in these pages,All your stories are excellent,,please write a followup ..Thanks to your work ,I have found passion again.
Your stories never fail to make me come.
Although, I've gotta say that this one and what the hell was it called the one where the chick is going out on a date and her dad comes and starts finger-fucking her? Favourites!
by
Anonymous02/28/06
Great one! In short., Loved it!!
After checking 'New' section for stories for a while, I had even stopped finishing to read a story before I got bored of the routine.
You story was great till the end with the sense of "getting caught".
by
Anonymous02/28/06
Well Done
I enjoyed your writing. I thinks this story has a long way to go before it ends. I am looking forward to additional chapters.
by
Anonymous03/17/06
well written
This is quite good - the progression seems beleivable.
by
Anonymous03/21/06
Fantastic
I have to say that is probably one of my most favourite peices of work on this site, I look forward to reading more of your work.
by
Anonymous03/30/06
You set the standard!
You are a super writer. All of your stories are well developed and progress in a realistic fashion. It is obvious that you know what you are doing. Keep it up.
by
Anonymous05/11/06
Beautiful!
What more can I say. I really enjoyed the tale and the tempo. I never had a sister.
by
Anonymous05/22/06
superb
this is one of the best stories on the site. the style of writing keeps a person aroused till the very last line. keep up the great work!
by
Anonymous11/06/06
best ever
best ever story well done!
by
Anonymous11/24/06
okay!
cool story...a story i hate in reality but love to read anyway! keep writing.
by
Anonymous12/27/06
superb
Excellent story,Very soft slow and yet very erotic , just the way I like it.
Keep up the good job
I loved the story, it was so sexy and very entertaining.
by
Anonymous01/04/07
Wow
Dude.....i don't even know where to begin. Excellently written...hot....incredible. On a scale from 1 to 10 I'd give it an OH MY GOD! I think you should continue the story of Tom and Julie. Please.
by
Anonymous01/12/07
HOTTT!!!
Great story. Hope you will go back and add more chapters. Excellent writting!
by
Anonymous02/03/07
My name is Tom!
I am soo HORNY after reading this story that I really could fuck one ANY or ALL of my 5 sisters RIGHT NOW! The part about almost getting caught was a page out of my past! Great Job!
English
Very Erotic
The story was very erotic. You need to take it one step further. We need a continuation!
natural progressions
very erotic... and yes a continuation would be nice.. thanks
Incredible Young Love and Exploration!!
What a writer ... and what a fantastic story of siblings helping each other learn about their bodies!
Keep up the great writing!!!
all good things to those who wait
please con. the story , as it is one of the best i have seen so far.
Loved it!
I absolutely loved it, I'm still hard!! I sure hope you write about these 2 again.
Thanks
jdjd432003@yahoo.com
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!
This was one of the best erotic/incest stories I have ever read (and I have read many of them). Thank you very much and please keep up the good work.
Jim
Great story.
This story was so real. The only way that this could be done is if it really happened to you. Great writer. Makes me feel as if I were there. Great.
i lost count !!....
heh heh .. its gooooooodddddd... i think i cummed 4/5 times...just lost the count ... me still hard...and i m sweating like a pig (do pigs sweat??)... i think i will do it again after 15 minutes.. ;-) ..
Awesome
Wish there was a sequel damn this was hot
PLEASE CONTINUE
"peeping tom" was a great story and it was of this kind.. it was real fun when parents never knew it. and my god.. when her sis gives him a note saying "PEEPING TOM", oh god, what a great writer u are? keep it up man. yet, its really hard to say which is the best story? each story is Best.
reading stories on this site since last 4 years. i must admit. PEEPING TOM is the best i've ever read. I m surprised why there is no second part?
comeon guy. U MUST WRITE. please? its a request. hope u will consider it.
Amazing
Anais Nin, who's she? You are the best eroticist on the web--maybe anywhere.
I agree
We really need a continuation of this story. The kids are growing up and needing each other and i think it would be great if you did someting wioth them where they had more than just a couple of hours to play and experiment...give them a weekend with thier parents going to a retreat or something and leaving them home alone. That would be a great story!
BEST WRITER
You are very talented and one of the best writers of erotica. I have managed to read all of your stories and I look forward to more!
so erotic
This has got to be one of the most erotic stories I have read in Literotica to date. Those little notes between sister and brother made me so hard, I thought I was going to bust out of my jeans, and the shower scene had me cumming in my pants. Keep up the good work and continue this story, Please!
Great
I have read several of your brother/sister stories and loved them all. You are one of the most talented writers of erotica I have read. I especially like the build-up and the escalation of sexual tension. Keep up the good work
awsome
Best bro/sis one i have read so far keep them cumming
Great Story
I have not been into incest stories. But if they are like this I'll start now. Great Story. Thanks.
TWO VIRGINS LOST TOGETHER
H O T ~ H O T. Brother and sister, with sister leading the charge to a wonderful story of a lost cherry. Brother was lucky. I had a twin sister - she and I became very clost at age 13 - bur REALLY CLOSE at age 15. I believe this story is real.
Damn Hot Story!!!
Wow, that story IS the best bro/sis story I have ever read! I hope you continue this encounter, I would love to read more.
Hot Stuff!
Brother/sister stories always get me feeling very horney, especially when they are so well done as yours. Lots of detail, descriptions, and thoughts and feelings. What more coculd these two explore together? He hasen't orally pleased her yet, might they try anal, or different positions, or places around the house...
Really Great! -Very Well Thought Out-
Hi, Great Story! The best I have ever read in this category!
I think the key to this story is the undertones of a strict religious household (adds to the taboo factor in the mind of the reader)..
I believe that the most successful story appeals most to common mental triggers (taboo's) and this story definitely does that (especially with the religious household - as stated above)..
Also, the length was just right, in my opinion, not too short and not too long :)
All round:... BRILLIANT!
Loved the sexual tension . . .
. . . and the device of the notes. You built your story well, and the characters and situations are believable.
Too hot for words!
This is definitely one of the hottest stories I have ever read about brother-sister incest. The tension brought about by the possible discovery by their parents adds a whole new dimension to the story. Even so, I'd like to read at least one chapter in which they can just freely make love without having to worry about the parents. Looking forward to more from you....
One of the hottest!!
WOW! One of the greatest I've ever read. Many thanks.
Looking forward to more like it.
Best story EVER.
You need to write more.
You have the bets stories here on this site.
WOW
That was awesome keep up the great work. Very very good job.
WRITE MORE.
WRITE MORE PLZ?
you write really well & i love all of your other stories.
Damn You're Good!!!!!
Enjoyed your story, as always! Sure wish I had the talent you have in writing! My talent is all in the sex, I just can't write about it!
YOU RULE! Keep up the great work!
RG
Not Your Typical...
This is not your typical suck and fuck story, it was well written and the characters were believable. I liked the way you had them gradually become aware of their desire for each other and the natural progression of their sex play. It was very well written. Look forward to more stories from you.
nice oh so nice ...
nicely written - cock-tip dripping by the end ... but how did it end?
super story
very good story. well written and arousing. very believable and made me hard.
loved it - from a woman
just wanted to differentiate from the male readers. love all of your stories, agree with other comments that you write with the 'voice' of the characters you create. thanks!
The best Symphonies are unfinished
The best story I have ever read in these pages,All your stories are excellent,,please write a followup ..Thanks to your work ,I have found passion again.
Great!
Super story with super plot and super characters. She is probably pregnant from the fuck in the shower so by all means, a continuation please!
well done
Bravo is all I can say
Another woman checking in
Your stories never fail to make me come.
Although, I've gotta say that this one and what the hell was it called the one where the chick is going out on a date and her dad comes and starts finger-fucking her? Favourites!
Great one! In short., Loved it!!
After checking 'New' section for stories for a while, I had even stopped finishing to read a story before I got bored of the routine.
You story was great till the end with the sense of "getting caught".
Well Done
I enjoyed your writing. I thinks this story has a long way to go before it ends. I am looking forward to additional chapters.
well written
This is quite good - the progression seems beleivable.
Fantastic
I have to say that is probably one of my most favourite peices of work on this site, I look forward to reading more of your work.
You set the standard!
You are a super writer. All of your stories are well developed and progress in a realistic fashion. It is obvious that you know what you are doing. Keep it up.
Beautiful!
What more can I say. I really enjoyed the tale and the tempo. I never had a sister.
superb
this is one of the best stories on the site. the style of writing keeps a person aroused till the very last line. keep up the great work!
best ever
best ever story well done!
okay!
cool story...a story i hate in reality but love to read anyway! keep writing.
superb
Excellent story,Very soft slow and yet very erotic , just the way I like it.
Keep up the good job
Yummy....oh so yummy....mmmmmm
I loved the story, it was so sexy and very entertaining.
Wow
Dude.....i don't even know where to begin. Excellently written...hot....incredible. On a scale from 1 to 10 I'd give it an OH MY GOD! I think you should continue the story of Tom and Julie. Please.
HOTTT!!!
Great story. Hope you will go back and add more chapters. Excellent writting!
My name is Tom!
I am soo HORNY after reading this story that I really could fuck one ANY or ALL of my 5 sisters RIGHT NOW! The part about almost getting caught was a page out of my past! Great Job!
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