Yours is a very erotic account of a most stimulating relationship between siblings. This is a great series and I love the detail you include, taking your reader completely into and involved in the experience. I feel as if I have been between your lovely thighs and sucked the nectar from the core of a sexy woman. Thank you for submitting this series.
Great installment, and speaking from a man's perspective, I can understand Gary needing to penetrate his sister. Sure the consequences could be catastrophic, but then again, it's fiction. Maybe Gary's sperm count is low :)
The part about the sister having feelings for other men should be explored though. Make the murkiness greater with brother getting jealous. Exactly how far should that aspect be explored ? That's the authors prerogative. But yes, this is well done. I really enjoy the angst depicted.
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Yours is a very erotic account of a most stimulating relationship between siblings. This is a great series and I love the detail you include, taking your reader completely into and involved in the experience. I feel as if I have been between your lovely thighs and sucked the nectar from the core of a sexy woman. Thank you for submitting this series.
It only gets better!
Great installment, and speaking from a man's perspective, I can understand Gary needing to penetrate his sister. Sure the consequences could be catastrophic, but then again, it's fiction. Maybe Gary's sperm count is low :)
me too !
The part about the sister having feelings for other men should be explored though. Make the murkiness greater with brother getting jealous. Exactly how far should that aspect be explored ? That's the authors prerogative. But yes, this is well done. I really enjoy the angst depicted.
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