Bride Submission: Boss's Bitch

Soooooo Goooooood!!!!!

I can't wait for the next Chapter.

Please

Don't keep us all waiting! This story seems so fresh and different, yet so raw and sexy. I love the combination of her strong feminist politics and her newly recognized submissive side. So far this has easily been one of the better stories to post here. I would not be truthful if I did not complement you beyond the concept you've developed and praise your writing as well. This is crisp and sensual, sexy and slutty. You deliver it all with a deft light touch, the sex is well written, as is the interplay of your characters. I only wonder what if anything she will have left for the honeymoon, yet with your ability to write I am thinking that the honeymoon, as well as the wedding and the pre-wedding will be extraordinary as well. I will be patient as all good things are worth the wait. Thank you for being so up lifting for me and I am sure all of the readers. Write on Silk write on!

Sorry

But this was simply terrible! What happened to your stories? As of late your postings have been badly written drivel.

Great

Always love how your sub characters first resist then accept their submissiveness.

great story keep if cumming

Brittany being a feminist and a slut? Mr pickerton can help her correct this by having.jis black bitch dominant daughter invite Brittany for an overnight to do some legal work such as a simple will and put her through the paces of sucking cliy and being fucked by a strp on. Next day she will be a total submissive for black cock and pussy plus a bbc babymaker and will helpbrecruit virgin conservative young women to black sexing and submission.

Bride Submission

Isn't it odd that those who criticise your writing hide behind anonymity. If they can't own their words they shouldn't write them.

I can't wait for the entire story.

Very Nice

You are one of my favoriate writers and if you keep writting I will keep comming for you.

wish i were brittany

such a hot story, please continue it.

kisses
bobbi

So hot

Such a great series. Couldn't quite get my head around her using her sexuality outside of the Order to get ahead in her career, wasn't sure if it fit in with character, is it not a betrayal of her fiance going outside the Order etc? Really hoping you continue on with it though, especially if it's more in line with the first entry.

Simply can't wait for the next installment!! I love everything I've read of yours. This story touches my sub side. Makes me sigh with contentment. Please please finish the series!! :)

My second begging letter

Your writing is fantastic your my favourite on here but please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please will you release the next part to this amazing story, I can't wait to read it. I check your pages every day to see of you have released it.
Hope to read your next part very soon

Author's note

Hi,
I do hope to continue this series, but am working on a couple other sequels as well as a few contest stories.

Lovin the submission

Great story Sexy. Will love the next part and the next part, etc.

Great story so far, can't wait for the next chapter & the following chapters. Keep up the great work. & a big thumbs up for your stories.

Please continue!

I hope you get back to this series soon.

great story

Can't wait till the next chapter. Great story line!!!

wow

please continue this series i can hardly wait to see what happens to her next. lucky little slut, wish i was her.

kisses bobbi

Great story

And I can't wait till the next episode - looking forward to the lesbian orgy.

Great.

When do you submit the next episode?

MORE

Please more!

good start!!

these two chapters could lead into a long series if the author would like it to go there. btw 5* on both chapters so far.

WHEN ARE WE GETTING MORE

PLEASE MORE, WHEN. THIS IS AWESOME WORK. YOU BEST SERIES YET. LOVE YOU JASMINE

More

I can't wait for the continuation of the Bride Submission. I would love to marry or be born in the Syndom society. Ummmm

More please!

I just read both parts and I'm craving so much more!

more

Please cont soon

NEXT EPISODE Please

Excellent first Two Chapters: Super Story. Very good Erotic Content. Have scored five (5 *) Stars. Cant Wait for Sequel/s
Ranji

Wanting More

Looking forward to future episodes. You appear to have an outline, even if you haven't kept to your schedule.

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

This series is some of your finest work!!! Please continue!

Great story line

Some of your best work. I have enjoyed every minute as Brittany embraces her inner slut. Cannot wait for the next installment!

Really Enjoyed

I enjoyed the story very much. Please give us more, want to see Brittany degraded because I know she is going to love it. Can't wait for more of the story. Love your writing.

Add more

Great story and would love to read more of the series please add more soon

Can't wait for more

I come back to this series every few months or so and really enjoy it. I can't wait to see what other shenanigans Brittany gets into.

Great story,

Just re-read this and it's still excellent 2nd time around. 😜. It would be great to have the next instalment! Thx.

Need more

Love the stories of yours

More

The rest of this definitely needs to happen.

please cont....

ive read this a few times and really want the cont... mostly to see what happens with her familes.

Continue

Please continue I'm so intrigued

loved it

really like the concept and how she's learning to work the system. hoping you return to this even if it's been 2+ years.

kisses

Love this series

Please continue

Awesome story. I hope you continue!

beulahthebrit

Nice, everything I like, oral, anal a bit of fisting capped off by a bit of ATM, keep it up Jasmine, your stories have it all and always get me wet.