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by Anonymous

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by With_Lust06/12/14

what's uncharacterstic?

It's a nice sex scene, but nothing happens that is humorous or a satire. Your blurb would suggest Femdom. But nothing happens that is out of the ordinary. Would probably fit better in Erotic Couplings. And it is too short.

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by mel_pomene06/12/14

It was a nice enough scene

Thank you for writing it so well and sharing it with us. I cannot, however, see anything humorous or satirical about it - but perhaps that's just me.

Keep writing - you're pretty good - and welcome to Literotica, by the way. Three stars.

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by Anonymous06/12/14

Should have moved out

Or thrown her out, but the rest was ridiculous.

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by tazz31706/12/14

DONT KNOW MUCH ABOUT THESE TWO

but it looks like the offense may win this one, TK U MLJ LV NV

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