Golden Wishes Ch. 01

nice

I like your writing style. also I was a really big fan of the other guy's genie thing (forgot his username) and was disappointed when his ended abruptly. glad to see something related is happening again.

:)

Great start

Please don't let this devolve into a fuckfest. Keep developing the mythology for how we find ourselves in this situation. I like the idea that it took someone with special characteristics to free her. I believe everything has a use and an abuse; so what was the purpose of her creation? How can they make the world a better place?

Good start

You write well. Is the genie going to be happy sharing?

Nice Start

I was a fan of some of the other genie stories on here. I hope you will continue. Like one of the others said, please keep the sex between the genie and her master instead of adding in a bunch of others if possible. You only had one spelling error: you have "the sun peaked through..." it would be peeked in that instance.

more please

am a sucker for these type of stories keep going :)

Great start

Wow lucky guy!!! Great story . . . But what happens next?

Go on

So far all the food genie stories I've read on this site either don't get finished or end abruptly so here's to hoping this one goes good and nice first chapter

Nice start

Still a bit short. There was the right amount of activity but it could have been embellished a bit more. But I am not really complaining.

Excellent stage setting. One item puzzled me though. Why would three of the eleven genies in the entire universe end up on Earth? I hope some excuse is found for that. It seems very improbable if it was purely random chance but if it was by design, where are the other 8?

Looking forward to chapter 2. Please don't keep us waiting. Pretty please.

Great start!

Just wanted to say keep up the good work. I don't have a real problem with the length of the chapters as long as you continue it. A lot of good genie stories don't get finished and I hate to see that happen to a story that has lots of potential. Most genie stories do feature a "harem" of sorts and it tend to bog the story down. If you do have a harem keep it small and meaningful. I would love to learn more about the other genies later, but I really want to see the relationship develop between genie and master. Keep it coming please

Can't wait to read more. Please continue!

Loved It

This is one of the only series I truly enjoy mad check everyday to see if it continued. Please please right more. Whether it be about where all the othe genies went or porn I don't care just please write more

hey cant wait for more made a strong start please continue

puzzling thing......

He grabs a cactus from his bedside table to defend himself.
A cactus?
Who would keep a cactus on their bedside table?