you REALLY need an editor & REALLY need someone to PROOFREAD your work before it's submitted.
Lol, its really pretty cheesy. Best way I can think to describe it. The chicks seem to cuss st him while they fuck him, hes just a lil slut, lol. I could really rib on the story but the flaws, or more outrageousness, are pretty obvious ;)
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you REALLY need an editor & REALLY need someone to PROOFREAD your work before it's submitted.
Lol, its really pretty cheesy. Best way I can think to describe it. The chicks seem to cuss st him while they fuck him, hes just a lil slut, lol. I could really rib on the story but the flaws, or more outrageousness, are pretty obvious ;)
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