Well written. Probably it will not attract too much favour as it has no sex in it. Keep going and build it up.
Ok, not much Sex yet, but please continue the story
It does not need sex in it to make it hot. Because it is very hot and I look forward to more of this story.
Continue, please.
I have met & talked with many women that have these same feelings about their sexual worth. I enjoyed this short 1 page setup. Hope you will continue to tell us more about this Lady, & her situation.
Great start, let it build. Looking for next chapter!
I feel like you're telling my personal story! I can't wait to read more........
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A good start
Well written. Probably it will not attract too much favour as it has no sex in it. Keep going and build it up.
Strong start !
Ok, not much Sex yet, but please continue the story
Loved the story
It does not need sex in it to make it hot. Because it is very hot and I look forward to more of this story.
Feedback
Continue, please.
Its Normal
I have met & talked with many women that have these same feelings about their sexual worth. I enjoyed this short 1 page setup. Hope you will continue to tell us more about this Lady, & her situation.
Great start, let it build. Looking for next chapter!
WOW!!
I feel like you're telling my personal story! I can't wait to read more........
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