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I Miss The Future

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by Cleardaynow06/14/14

Really like this one a lot

Fresh and original, achieves a credible and sympathetic voice, very subtle.

I like this one by far the best of your recent poems. It skewers a particular feeling so sharply and it transcends self pity. Very good indeed in my opinion.

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