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Expirement Gone Wrong

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/07/04

Lovely Sci-Fi/Horror

A fast-paced tale in the tradition of classic horror movies. Nice work Vassago!

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by Anonymous11/18/08

rushed and lack of professionalism

Why is it so hard to get people to check their stories for proper grammar and spelling?

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by PrincessErin11/18/08

Oh dear...

I believe the title of the story had a typo. Can't be good for the rest of the story. Please get an editor or at least someone else to read it. Spellcheck isn't a god.

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by Anonymous08/16/11

everybody needs to realise that none of us are perfect but i personally loved it. short and sweet is perfect for bedtime

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