All Comments  for

Caught On Video

byDoctor33©
All
Comments (17)
by Anonymous

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by MattressThrasher06/13/14

More please

Loved it. Hope you continue the story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/13/14

It's great that the boy spurts his semen all over his mother's tits

And I love that mom keeps her eyes focused on her son's big hard cock and loaded balls. But I think there's a much better place for the boy to blow his young balls up into and he and his mother will realize that real soon. Guess where.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by pinoy_hunk06/13/14

Nice

Keep it cumming! :-)

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/13/14

cum shot

Love that his cums lands on her face and tits

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/13/14

How long will DAD be gone !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story could go on a long time, good read keep it up.........................

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by goaly0806/13/14

nice story cant wait to see what happens next. well if you make a sequal

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by JimOtt06/13/14

More of this story PLEASE?

Come on there HAS to be more of this story.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by live4thebj06/13/14

Sequel is needed

She takes the tip this must lead to something else.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/14/14

so what makes the mom immediately turn into a dirty slut with her son? Is she some kind of pervert child molester? Please explain how a son created through the process of meiosis which means the son has pretty much the exact genes as the father have a "bigger dick?"
i swear these stories are written by uneducated people who lack a single ounce of talent. Why not try to make a story some what believable?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by homerjay06/14/14

loved it

wonderfully hot. thanks.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/14/14

quit nitpicking you people

I hate when people feel the need to say how unrealistic the story is and that the writer has no talent. WRITE SOMETHING YOURSELF. These are incest stories. They are not going to be realistic. Why did the mom suddenly turn into a nasty talking slut? Because it is a story and it was written that way. Don't read incest/taboo stories if you're going to just pick them apart. Are you a professional critic or just a fat 40 year old virgin living in his parent's basement?

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Ducky706/14/14

need to finish what you start

Good story so far. Needs to have a little more action between them.

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by sabra1602306/14/14

Keep it going

Calls for more chapters. Thanks

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Anonymous06/14/14

Loved It

Love this story, more please when you get to fuck her

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Sex4lf5706/15/14

Next chapter, please. Very hot!!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by Sidboy7706/16/14

Excellent story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.
by RockyStone06/17/14

Interesting

You had a really quick swing from what I thought (mommy is mad!), and then mommy decides to get some hot action. I have mixed feelings wanting more detail and/or mom declaring to herself that she is going to fix his little red wagon with square wheels. The idea was there with mom trading embarrassment for embarrassment. Maybe a forethought before she goes for it. The ending cracked me up though!
RS

If the above comment contains any ads, links, or breaks Literotica rules, please report it.

Click here to leave your own comment on this submission!  or
Back to Caught On Video  or
More submissions by Doctor33.

Add a
Comment

Post a public comment on this submission (click here to send private anonymous feedback to the author instead).

Post comment as (click to select):

You may also listen to a recording of the characters.

Preview comment

Forgot your password?

Please wait

Change picture

Your current user avatar, all sizes:

Default size User Picture  Medium size User Picture  Small size User Picture  Tiny size User Picture

You have a new user avatar waiting for moderation.

Select new user avatar:

   Cancel