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Hot And Sexy Read****
Thanks for sharing.
good flow
It made me want to go see my neighbor.
Awesome
Very enjoyable read. Thankyou
Very hot sexy!
Very good short story! Are we to expect more to come?
Well-Written
I really enjoyed this scrumptous piece of erotica. I smiled when Anne calls Jack "eminently fuckable." And I have to admit to you, it was a terribly arousing read. You really have a talent for it.
The characters seem similar to the previous writing, "At Long Last." Just an observation. I like these characters. Could you describe them in a bit more detail next time you use them (hair/eye color), please? Only if you wish to, of course.
Looking forward to more written adventures, m
My Favorite New Author
Beautiful and sexy, very well-written. Love all your stories, but the pierced nipples make this one my favorite.
Thank you all
Thank you all for your feedback. I just started writing this type of story recently, and I'm glad you enjoy these.
Some of my characters sound similar because they are all based on people I know. Some of the stories - Close To Home, On The Road, Raising Public Awareness, and my newest, It's Showtime - are more like memoirs since those were personal experiences.
UMMMMMMM!!!!!
Sensual...passionate...pleasure.....more please!
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