Given the story line (Nazi Germany, concentration camp, etc.), This belongs in the non-consent/Reluctance category. Since most BDSM stories are usually consensual and this is not.
Interesting setting you've chosen. Looking forward to more.
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Anonymous06/13/14
Paradox
How can the forbidden be stimulating? Humans must make decisions which a deep in the grey zone of Good and Evil. What the Nazis did with the Jews is reprehensible but can this type of story be enjoyed as fantasy?
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Anonymous06/13/14
More!
The intensity of how you write in details about the dynamic between her and him... Despite the much debated setting. I want to read more! And soon please
If you are going to write a less than pleasant comment, have the courage and courtesy to use a name, any name. Anonymous is the cover of cowards without conviction.
I found this too distressing to even begin to read it
I realise you have taken a subject which is, for many of us, myself included, a step too far. It was, apparently, a courageous decision to write and submit it and you seem to have poked a hornet's nest with this one, which is not necessarily a bad thing. The fact remains that, IMO, the schoah - and those who perpetrated it - are not suitable for this kind of vicarious interest.
As I said above, I have not read the story, only its synopsis, and have not voted it at all in order that my own views do not skew the score unfairly.
It would seem you have the ability to write well, and I hope you will continue to write for us, but this is not for me. As someone mentioned below, it is cowardly to hide to behind the Anonymous tag and I have no intention of doing so. These are my feelings; you must decide what you own feelings are.
Great story, and a theme that I find very erotic. I see it's part 1, and part 2 is eagerly awaited. Why 'blue-eyed'....? Thoroughly enjoyed the description of the sexual activity..just the right length and level of force...nice. Thank you.
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Anonymous06/16/14
Good read
Gritty subject with smooth writing. I enjoyed the topic. Probably because I feel you must be of decent of one or the other. Which in itself is hot. I have no account here or I would reply as a user not as Anonymous. Sorry.
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Anonymous06/17/14
Interesting.
I saw this story in the "new" section when it first came out and just couldn't click on it to read--such a controversial topic. I accidentally clicked on the second story, read it, liked it, looked for the first story and was shocked to find it was one I had skipped over previously. I have now read both and while this topic (Nazi Germany) isn't my kink, both stories are very well written. I look forward to more from the author-even a continuation of this story.
English
This good be a good story but...
Given the story line (Nazi Germany, concentration camp, etc.), This belongs in the non-consent/Reluctance category. Since most BDSM stories are usually consensual and this is not.
follow-up
I meant to write "could be a good story" not "good be a good story". Sorry for the typo.
Nice start
Interesting setting you've chosen. Looking forward to more.
Paradox
How can the forbidden be stimulating? Humans must make decisions which a deep in the grey zone of Good and Evil. What the Nazis did with the Jews is reprehensible but can this type of story be enjoyed as fantasy?
More!
The intensity of how you write in details about the dynamic between her and him... Despite the much debated setting. I want to read more! And soon please
Good, bad, snarky, or indifferent
If you are going to write a less than pleasant comment, have the courage and courtesy to use a name, any name. Anonymous is the cover of cowards without conviction.
I found this too distressing to even begin to read it
I realise you have taken a subject which is, for many of us, myself included, a step too far. It was, apparently, a courageous decision to write and submit it and you seem to have poked a hornet's nest with this one, which is not necessarily a bad thing. The fact remains that, IMO, the schoah - and those who perpetrated it - are not suitable for this kind of vicarious interest.
As I said above, I have not read the story, only its synopsis, and have not voted it at all in order that my own views do not skew the score unfairly.
It would seem you have the ability to write well, and I hope you will continue to write for us, but this is not for me. As someone mentioned below, it is cowardly to hide to behind the Anonymous tag and I have no intention of doing so. These are my feelings; you must decide what you own feelings are.
great work
I cant wait to read more..
Lovely....
Great story, and a theme that I find very erotic. I see it's part 1, and part 2 is eagerly awaited. Why 'blue-eyed'....? Thoroughly enjoyed the description of the sexual activity..just the right length and level of force...nice. Thank you.
Good read
Gritty subject with smooth writing. I enjoyed the topic. Probably because I feel you must be of decent of one or the other. Which in itself is hot. I have no account here or I would reply as a user not as Anonymous. Sorry.
Interesting.
I saw this story in the "new" section when it first came out and just couldn't click on it to read--such a controversial topic. I accidentally clicked on the second story, read it, liked it, looked for the first story and was shocked to find it was one I had skipped over previously. I have now read both and while this topic (Nazi Germany) isn't my kink, both stories are very well written. I look forward to more from the author-even a continuation of this story.
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