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Holding the Bag

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by Anonymous

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by 7daysuntil06/18/14

I really enjoyed this story. I was thinking that Judy was going to be the one with someone and her husband was going to be the one "HOLDING THE BAG".

PLEASE CONTINUE TO WRITE.... YOU CAN ONLY GET BETTER!

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by KarenE07/22/14

Too Short

And she should have barged into the 3-some and chewed them all out.

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by mcbs08/17/14

Incomplete

An explanation should have been provided on why Judy was left out. Perhaps she wasn't. She may have just been last on some sort of rotation. This sounds like a job for the author, Finish The Damn Story.

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by impo_5808/17/14

1*, why?

How could Tim be in one place fucking Simone with the other two, and be at the same time in Liz's house fucking her?

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by rightbank08/18/14

just wrong

on so many levels.

it isn't a swap if 3 become so self involved they ignore the 4th.

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by TornadoTys02/13/15

Where Is The rest of the story. ..!

How did Tim get to be to different places fucking 2 different women !

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by Sigint03/25/15

Editor, UP

In regards to Tim, you dropped the ball. Did you mean Ben? Unsatisfying finish. Big overall "Why?"

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by DrSemblance08/23/16

Swinging needs rules. If you don't make rules you can't bitch about the other parties fucking. As someone said, you confront them then and there and make damn sure rules are established.

Not pull into a bar and fuck the first person you remember. Introducing potential diseases into the group is just plain stupid and still doesn't address the problem.

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