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Anonymousabout 13 years agoThe whole story was ok, but you really need to learn to spell and proper grammer. I realize this is fiction, but due to poor grammer and spelling, it was hard to follow. Find an EDITOR before submitting any more!
Anonymousover 11 years agoEditor
It's a good story, but is in desperate need of a good editor. Hope to see more.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThis was my favorite by far, ruining pure Christians girls is so hot. Too bad the author disappeared.
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