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Toyboy and His Women Pt. 04

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by HoneyAdored06/29/14

One of your best so far

5ed and favourited,
I did enjoy the storyline. There were elements in your story that struck a chord wit me hence my scoring and favouriting. I also think that your writing has improved over the 4 parts, though I think it would be even better if you showed your characters feelings and emotions a bit more.

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by freeman6406/30/14

Thanks for the advice

Thanks Honey, for the advice and rating. It is nice to know you liked it, and maybe my characters will have more emotions in future, hopefully. :)

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